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Judgment by WesleyChen Judgment by WesleyChen
Hammer time
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Okay, this is a pretty darned good picture! The atmosphere is super dark and tense and dangerous, but the heroine doesn't give a crap because she's got an immense rocket-powered hammer!

The Good: It's a real eye-catching piece. The monster is the picture of malevolent power while the heroine exudes confidence and strength. Both are beautifully rendered and the lighting is superbly done.

The Bad: The hammer's jet wash implies that the thing is active but this is in contrast with her pose, which implies that she is holding it rather casually as opposed to restraining its immense power.

The Ugly: Nothing reaches the level of ugly in this picture.

This is a very interesting picture and we would love to see more of this character - especially in a more dynamic action scene where you could really show off what this hammer can do!

Vision is good - you very effectively conveyed the danger she faces with the gigantic monster behind her and the fact that she really couldn't care less.

Originality is good - while there is nothing new in the theme of monster juxtaposed with a beautiful woman, we feel that judging the originality of a work only on its theme is kind of lame. You didn't trace, the work is your own, and as such we give you good marks on originality.

Technique is good. The proportions on both characters are good and the composition of this piece is excellent!

Impact is very good - As we've said before, this is an eye-catching piece!

Keep up the good work!
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WintersRead Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Photographer
Suggested!
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WesleyChen Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
:o
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simple-minds Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist
I would'nt turn my back on that thing I I were you! You conveyed its size and used light to do it. Well done.
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chappy-lips Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
I like the fact that as soon as I zoom in, the details reveal themselves much clearer. Your technique and skill are wonderful.
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TercelBg Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
Maybe you'd want to show the place where the handle attaches to the hammer's head. I wouldn't guess it is a hammer unless I read it in the description. I like the style tho and the  way you handdled the rocks is really cool. You might as well try to seperate the character from the mid/background too. I hope this is useful, keep it up !
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DaichiAnimeGod Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
WOAH! O_O
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selftaughtartist1 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student Filmographer
i like this new "undiscovered" feature. im seeing a lot of awesome art like this one.
it's breathtaking!
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Futuretabs Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
wow :O im glad i found this in the undiscovered section
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NOOBArtiste Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
NEEDS MORE VIEWS!!
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