Okay, this is a pretty darned good picture! The atmosphere is super dark and tense and dangerous, but the heroine doesn't give a crap because she's got an immense rocket-powered hammer!
The Good: It's a real eye-catching piece. The monster is the picture of malevolent power while the heroine exudes confidence and strength. Both are beautifully rendered and the lighting is superbly done.
The Bad: The hammer's jet wash implies that the thing is active but this is in contrast with her pose, which implies that she is holding it rather casually as opposed to restraining its immense power.
The Ugly: Nothing reaches the level of ugly in this picture.
This is a very interesting picture and we would love to see more of this character - especially in a more dynamic action scene where you could really show off what this hammer can do!
Vision is good - you very effectively conveyed the danger she faces with the gigantic monster behind her and the fact that she really couldn't care less.
Originality is good - while there is nothing new in the theme of monster juxtaposed with a beautiful woman, we feel that judging the originality of a work only on its theme is kind of lame. You didn't trace, the work is your own, and as such we give you good marks on originality.
Technique is good. The proportions on both characters are good and the composition of this piece is excellent!
Impact is very good - As we've said before, this is an eye-catching piece!
Maybe you'd want to show the place where the handle attaches to the hammer's head. I wouldn't guess it is a hammer unless I read it in the description. I like the style tho and the way you handdled the rocks is really cool. You might as well try to seperate the character from the mid/background too. I hope this is useful, keep it up !